Living Melodies

couldn’t sleep, watched a movie, then this song came out of my mind….

couldn’t sleep, watched a movie, then this song came out of my mind….
one of its line is taken from my own comment for my facebook status =P

some time between 2:30 - 3:00 a.m - May 10, 2009

#1
Last night was a foolish one
I couldnt resist to make mistakes
and went there without my mind
letting you go with another hands

Pre-Chorus
no, I can’t believe it’s true
I’m losing my sense

Chorus:
Even golden jar needs to be polished
I’ll do anything to fix my rusty heart
Just to get you back into me
and fixing everything wrong in our art
art of (love/life?)

#2
Just give me another chance
I promise that I’ll be myself this time
and pardon me of what I have done
let me melt frozen heart in my mind

=> Pre-Chorus
=> Chorus

Rev. 0
note:
1. chorus - line #4 seems not correct gramatically and esthetically
2. chorus - line #5 still confused, which one is better?